Friday, March 18, 2011

Showing Concern

The recent events in Japan have been a topic of great concern this week in class.  As always, this group has amazed me with the empathy they have displayed during our discussions.  You should be proud of your children for the way they have shared their thoughts and concerns as they try to understand this disaster.  To show our support to the people of Japan, students have written Tanka poems inspired by some images they have seen in class.  Tanka is an ancient form of Japanese poetry comprised of five lines and a total of thirty one syllables (5,7,5,7,7).  Please feel free to share your thoughts and comments on their beautiful poems or this tragic event.



The baby looks sad
both the parents are missing
during the earthquake
I feel bad for everyone
thousands of people have died
by Riley

A miracle comes
out of everything that came
a baby is found
what a surpise to people
a new lovely sound is here
by Logan

If I was in a
tsunami I would be scared
if I was the dad
I would be very happy,
and cheerful, and thankful, and glad
by Aurora

Dad reunited
mother hasn't been found yet
miracles happen
she was found four days later
following the Tsunami
by Dakota

The most surprising
thing that happened in my life
a baby survived
four days later the baby
was found among the remains
by Hunter

Hoping for safety
sad for people who have lost
thankful for rescues
swampy from all the water
disaster from the wrecked homes
by Heather






Big waves incoming
lots of people in big fear
trees getting knocked down
houses getting washed away
cars are going for a swim
by Chris

The wave is coming
it's tearing everything down
it is very sad
all of the trees are falling
the people are screaming help
by Rory

A big wave coming
where could you go at this time
it appears fast
when it hits land in Japan
it wipes stuff away so quick
by Logan

Harsh trees falling down
waves coming in rapidly
houses falling fast
cars floating down a river
boats flipping over down river
by Jeremy

The wave is here now
nothing can stop it coming
everybody's scared
houses are moving away
there's nothing to do to help
by Jessie

The waves are coming
it's the worst thing that happened
it is a nightmare
all the houses coming down
people are screaming for help
by Abby

Waves coming in fast
belongings will be destroyed
cars will be ruined
citizens and pets might die
trees and grass will be dug up
by Kamryn




A pile of junk
used to be valuable
everything broken
a tragic story it is
something horrible happened
by Logan

Some people are sick
finding lost family members
belongings are gone
debris from destroyed houses
sleeping in freezing cold ice
by Kamryn



2 comments:

  1. Wow! Such insight and touching thoughts. Thank you for sharing this ancient form of poetry with all of us. What and amazing job your students did with this project.

    Mrs. Mom Fletcher

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  2. I feel sorry for everything that happenedto the people that lived there. But cartoon network said they are going to help rebuild the houses and farms. So there is a bright side to what happened.

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